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To think of you and him.
The feeling of having someone in your arms.
The song lyrics drew a map to my heart.
If only they were my life.
The Guy on t.v says he wants a girl with a pretty face
and skin
and body.
I messed up somehow, to be punished this way.
The one person I fell for (feel for)
Say we are too good of friends.
The one person, my bestfriend
is happy.
And that makes me smile
She is pretty eh?
But she is so much more then that.
She has a heart and so much to give.

its a party without the people
its a show without the sound
its a dance without the steps
now you get the point?



Im startin to think the cut across my hand
Wasn't an accident.
And the rash from the band-aid.
Will go away in a week.
This feeling.
Never.

I want to be the girl in your arms.
But its never going to happen.
You love pretty girls, I get it.
Im lonely,
Thats all.
©2007-2009 ~megandurnford
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full title-its a party without the people, its a show without the sound, its a dance without the steps, now you get the point?

megan
this isnt for NaPoWriMo
tis is just self critque
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I want to say so much, but I'll just hug you instead :hug:

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You are a pretty girl, Megan, who writes beautifully.
A sad and beautiful poem, as usual.
Take care :smooch:

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full title-its a party without the people, its a show without the sound, its a dance without the steps, now you get the point?


that above is a poem in itself.

Why not add it at the end of this poem.

its a party without the people
its a show without the sound
its a dance without the steps
now you get the point?

Could also be the chorus of a song in this poem.

:teddy:

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Hi Meagan I know I have not been by in a while, but what a lovely piece to come back to! Sad and beautiful at the same time..I agree with Lovespoon...add: a party without the people, its a show without the sound, its a dance without the steps, now you get the point?
The perfect ending...Sky

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haha thanks hun :)
i may add that

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baby, seasons change, people dont
perfec t, i will add that :heart:

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baby, seasons change, people dont
thank you !

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baby, seasons change, people dont
thank you :) thats all i need :hug:

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baby, seasons change, people dont
:heart: Very clever words of yours.

Ok I wrote a poem to enter your spring contest called Sparing Spring

=P

:teddy:

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"Women may fake orgasms, but men fake entire relationships."
Now that's a love subject worth thinking about.

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